Creative Writing - Assignment 4

Creative Writing - Assignment 4

Convey an experience of being alone - that was the assignment. Instead of re-telling a personal tale, and digging through memories, I created this from scratch. I haven't written a poem since college. Any thoughts?  

One

tree-idaho-alone.jpg

If
she
were
here,
then
They would be.

But
They is not a word
to
he.

Not
we
not
two
not
three
Nor she.
Just
he.

A
lone.
Just
one.
Now on
to
be.

Just
he.

Creative Writing - Assignment 5

Creative Writing - Assignment 5

Creative Writing - Assignment 3

Creative Writing - Assignment 3